为大家带来2018年1月20场的雅思写作小作文范文,本场小作文话题为:The graph gives information about the number of yearly visits from France and North America for holiday and business. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant1.png1月20场雅思写作小作文范文:The line graph illustrates how many visitors from North America and France travel to UK for doing business and for taking a holiday in one year.It is noticeable that the number of visitors from North America and France who take a vacation in UK is equal at only approximately 1 million in January. Since then North America enjoys a jump until July while France increases slowly but in this month, as many as around 3 million travelers from North American come to UK, in contrast to only 1 million France visitors. By contrast, figures for both areas afterwards have dropped back to merely some 1 million again in December.Similarly, both regions also follow a similar pattern in the number of annual visitors for business. From around 0.15 million and about 0.05 million respectively in January, figures for these two regions saw a slight fluctuation across the whole year, with the peak at roughly 0.35 million and just 0.2 million separately in October or so.Overall, the number of visitors from North America is higher than that of France for business and holiday, although both share a similar trend during the one-year period.1月20场雅思写作小作文范文解析本次小作文是一个动态的线图。注意主要信息点总体趋势,极值和数据的对比以及时态的表达方式。高分表达(范文中已用红色标注) how many visitors from North America and France travel to UK for doing business and for taking a holiday in one year 在一年中有多少来自北美和法国的游客去英国做生意或度假。(用宾语从句改写题目,注意下句型的转换)It is noticeable that 值得注意的是in contrast to 相比于with the peak at roughly 0.35 million and just 0.2 million separately in October or so. 两者在十月份最高点分别是。。。 (独立主格)